Gal in the train...
Part 1
Category:: Fiction(Pulp :D)
Source/Inspiration:: Stupid Thots like "I can also write Fiction"...N yes Apna Chetan Bhagat...
Subject:: Forgot...Oh yes...Gal In The Train ...
Aadi was on his way to hometown in allahabad. Journey was on his fav Indian railways.
His girl-sensitive-eyes caught a glimpse of her on Borivalli Platform....
Aadi was our Once-upon-a-time-happening-dude and like maximum desperate-teenagers who have spent
their lives with a bunch of rowdy teenage pals in school n cracking jokes on all the so-called-happening-couples in college time...Khud ki baat poocho toh never got a chance to tango with any girl even after becoming a software techie...N this Aadi's eyes were searching in the wilderness for that special face which will be his Shining-Star.
This time the shining face was wearing black salwar kameez with a silk dupatta draped over her shoulders...
With the baby-like-sweet-innocence on her unblemished face,her hazel-green eyes were trying to scroll through the Railway-Chart...And that moment was shouting loudly to him....
"Ki yehi toh hai woh jisko dhundte thhe hum...".
There itself..he decided to channelise his youthfull energy into this moment...
"Yeh Mumbai-Allahbad yahi aake lagegi naa..."
"Jiii??...Haan yahi lagegi..."
"Okay"... Her demotivating reaction made Aadi move towards nearby tea stall with grim n sullen look...He grabbed a mumbaiya vada paav with mirchi to amplify the storm inside ....
And he heard Miss sunshine giggling with her friends...And from the distant stall corner he was admiring the flawless beauty .... N soya hua Emraan Hashmi inside fadfadaane lagaa... N the formula words of the likes of 'Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat...' jumbled inside to express luv in the easiest desi style ever...
"कुदरत का नूर है ये ...कि कुछ ख़ास तो ज़रूर है ये ...
क्यूँ ये चेहरा इस कदर मन पे छाया है ...
क्यूँ इस पल में मैंने खुद को गवाया है ....
इन एहसासों की महफ़िल में सिर्फ तेरा ही नाम गूंजा है ...
इस पल में मैंने खुदा समझ ... तुझ को ..हाँ सिर्फ तुझ को पूजा है .."
Shaayrana andaaz ko train no. 2956 ki nazar lag gayi....
Kismat connection made them land into the same coach and same compartment...
Railway wale kept an uninvited-surprise waiting on aadi’s seat....
One middle aged bhaisahab was settled calmly on his reservation seat having CCD-style-gossips with newly found targets.
Miss sunshine gave a tere-jaise-bahut-sare-peeche-pade-hai attitude wali mischievous smiley in reply to his lets-be-friends smile....
With this guy now sitting on Aadi's seat,it indeed was a litmus test for him to prove his mettle.
After w8ing 4 some change 2 happen he gave his deadly stare 2 this surprise and what-a-crank-this-guy-is smile to Miss Shining Star’s gharwale...
Uninvited-surprise told Aadi to hop in sumwhere saying , “Bhai baitho aaram se 2 min... Kaamdham karke aaya hu”
“Even I have not bunked school to compete wid you UncleJi” said Aadi, self congratulating himself on those impression creating perfect lines.
Aadi felt thankfull to this bhaisahab for giving this youngish feeling, all credits 2 the Old spice effect.
TT became the refree and gave verdict on Aadi’s side...After hopping his tashreef, he was fired a ques from paas wali aunty ji..
"Kahan se ho beta?"
It was impression creation time considering the promising eyes, aunty's so-so admirable Miss sunshine had...Clock ticked loud "Per4mance time Aadi"!!
"Allahbad se aunty ji" ...with a confident colgate smile.
"Achcha beta... Allahbad me kahan se?"
"Gandhi nagar se auntyji..."
Eavesdropping helps to establish repo as always..
"Achcha beta... phir toh hum bhi tumhare padosi hi hai!! Actually hum beta rehne wale Naini ke hai par allahabad me inka business hai..."
Mind Processor flashed some one liners...
After increasing jaan pehchaan using smart one liners... his teeth felt the 10 on 10 shiver...
Eye scanner gave the results...Miss sunshine is the one...
Aadi wondered whether eyes have an embedded brain or sumthng kya...
Within seconds they catch the best figures...
"Kya karte ho Mumbai me beta?"
I will keep ur daughter in heavens 4 sure... Sasurji ki kasam saasumaa, aadi dreamt….
"Job me hu auntyji..."
"Kis job me BETA?"
Chinta nakko auntyji...main hu naa…..
"Software me aunty ji"
….That sounded awesome mate….
Dadaji stretched his earlobes...He replied in a user friendly way..
"COMPUTER me dadaji…."Giving a down-to-earth middle-class-family-types-smile…
"Sahi hai beta...padhai ki aapne isiliye toh aaj yahan ho..."
Auntyji started the 2nd level of conversation ...N Aadi congratulated himself on passing the sudden-death round...
"Humari pinki bhi tumhare...Woh kya kehte hai... SAftware me hi hai...Mumbai me iski badi company hai...bahar ki hai...Hai na Pinky bitiya??" turning towards my gal
N there she gives me a a sweet n shy...free-me-le-lo-smile....to me...
I giggled like wicked sunny...
…..Auntyji toh main rishta Pakka samjhu...
Dream girl...dream home... On sum beautiful island...picture perfect!!!
and the dream girl sneezed ...every1 replied in sync hey raam!
A beautiful smiled passed nearby creating butterflies and elephants in my stomach..
"Kinke ho beta.."as if sensing the apshagun caused by cheenk..
"Auntyji Koli ji ka...."
There was a 1 min silence observed..
Auntyji gave a perfect fake smile...as if saying lets end it here...Aadi thought that he has lost his small mission sumwhere...
He remembered the famous dialogue from one of his fav movie Swades..Jo kabhi nahi jati wahi hai JAATI...
He understood ki humari kismat me toh beta aankhe thandi karna hi likha hai...but won't settle on anything
less than non stop nain matakka...thnxx 2 the perfect angle set by the coincidence of seating arrangement...
And sand glass of time was moving gradually...N they were settling down...
They heard Paas wale bhaiya telling some testimonies of Mumbai Trip...
"Ki Bhaiya...Mumbai ke cinema hall me bhi kaa gajab system hai bhai...picture se pehle jana gana mana chalta hai.."
Aadi thought what a deshbhakt...
"Mulle kafi thhe par phir bhi Sab khade hue..." he continued
Aadi saluted their thought process n started thinking about these biased minds ...Sheher ki safaai toh municipality kar degi par ye Mann ki safaai koun karega?
And he immersed himself into the quilt as they started playing cards bringing back the dreaming horses back to mind’s stable and sending the revolutionary thinker inside on bon voyage....
Heard a voice inside…Bade logo ke soch me chote maare jate hai...Hamesha…N there in the dreams he was eloping wid the gal in the other side of the world...
"Chaai chaai ....chaai le lo..." Chaai wala pushed Aadi slightly n asked...
"Bhaiya chai lenge...Allahabad aane wala hai..."
Aawaz sunke Angdaai maari…Dekha toh paaya ki kisi sundar chehre ki jagah koi amma apni paltan ke sath baithi thhi….He went to the gate side…had subah wali full fledged kulli...Apni shaqal ka jaayza liya…Aur khud ko dekh ke muskuraya…Is this loss of another wud-hav-been-my-dream-gal…??N full confidence me 1 aawaz di…
"Bhaiya 1 Cutting Chai dena…"
Category:: Fiction(Pulp :D)
Source/Inspiration:: Stupid Thots like "I can also write Fiction"...N yes Apna Chetan Bhagat...
Subject:: Forgot...Oh yes...Gal In The Train ...
Aadi was on his way to hometown in allahabad. Journey was on his fav Indian railways.
His girl-sensitive-eyes caught a glimpse of her on Borivalli Platform....
Aadi was our Once-upon-a-time-happening-dude and like maximum desperate-teenagers who have spent
their lives with a bunch of rowdy teenage pals in school n cracking jokes on all the so-called-happening-couples in college time...Khud ki baat poocho toh never got a chance to tango with any girl even after becoming a software techie...N this Aadi's eyes were searching in the wilderness for that special face which will be his Shining-Star.
This time the shining face was wearing black salwar kameez with a silk dupatta draped over her shoulders...
With the baby-like-sweet-innocence on her unblemished face,her hazel-green eyes were trying to scroll through the Railway-Chart...And that moment was shouting loudly to him....
"Ki yehi toh hai woh jisko dhundte thhe hum...".
There itself..he decided to channelise his youthfull energy into this moment...
"Yeh Mumbai-Allahbad yahi aake lagegi naa..."
"Jiii??...Haan yahi lagegi..."
"Okay"... Her demotivating reaction made Aadi move towards nearby tea stall with grim n sullen look...He grabbed a mumbaiya vada paav with mirchi to amplify the storm inside ....
And he heard Miss sunshine giggling with her friends...And from the distant stall corner he was admiring the flawless beauty .... N soya hua Emraan Hashmi inside fadfadaane lagaa... N the formula words of the likes of 'Pyaar Ishq Mohabbat...' jumbled inside to express luv in the easiest desi style ever...
"कुदरत का नूर है ये ...कि कुछ ख़ास तो ज़रूर है ये ...
क्यूँ ये चेहरा इस कदर मन पे छाया है ...
क्यूँ इस पल में मैंने खुद को गवाया है ....
इन एहसासों की महफ़िल में सिर्फ तेरा ही नाम गूंजा है ...
इस पल में मैंने खुदा समझ ... तुझ को ..हाँ सिर्फ तुझ को पूजा है .."
Shaayrana andaaz ko train no. 2956 ki nazar lag gayi....
Kismat connection made them land into the same coach and same compartment...
Railway wale kept an uninvited-surprise waiting on aadi’s seat....
One middle aged bhaisahab was settled calmly on his reservation seat having CCD-style-gossips with newly found targets.
Miss sunshine gave a tere-jaise-bahut-sare-peeche-pade-hai attitude wali mischievous smiley in reply to his lets-be-friends smile....
With this guy now sitting on Aadi's seat,it indeed was a litmus test for him to prove his mettle.
After w8ing 4 some change 2 happen he gave his deadly stare 2 this surprise and what-a-crank-this-guy-is smile to Miss Shining Star’s gharwale...
Uninvited-surprise told Aadi to hop in sumwhere saying , “Bhai baitho aaram se 2 min... Kaamdham karke aaya hu”
“Even I have not bunked school to compete wid you UncleJi” said Aadi, self congratulating himself on those impression creating perfect lines.
Aadi felt thankfull to this bhaisahab for giving this youngish feeling, all credits 2 the Old spice effect.
TT became the refree and gave verdict on Aadi’s side...After hopping his tashreef, he was fired a ques from paas wali aunty ji..
"Kahan se ho beta?"
It was impression creation time considering the promising eyes, aunty's so-so admirable Miss sunshine had...Clock ticked loud "Per4mance time Aadi"!!
"Allahbad se aunty ji" ...with a confident colgate smile.
"Achcha beta... Allahbad me kahan se?"
"Gandhi nagar se auntyji..."
Eavesdropping helps to establish repo as always..
"Achcha beta... phir toh hum bhi tumhare padosi hi hai!! Actually hum beta rehne wale Naini ke hai par allahabad me inka business hai..."
Mind Processor flashed some one liners...
After increasing jaan pehchaan using smart one liners... his teeth felt the 10 on 10 shiver...
Eye scanner gave the results...Miss sunshine is the one...
Aadi wondered whether eyes have an embedded brain or sumthng kya...
Within seconds they catch the best figures...
"Kya karte ho Mumbai me beta?"
I will keep ur daughter in heavens 4 sure... Sasurji ki kasam saasumaa, aadi dreamt….
"Job me hu auntyji..."
"Kis job me BETA?"
Chinta nakko auntyji...main hu naa…..
"Software me aunty ji"
….That sounded awesome mate….
Dadaji stretched his earlobes...He replied in a user friendly way..
"COMPUTER me dadaji…."Giving a down-to-earth middle-class-family-types-smile…
"Sahi hai beta...padhai ki aapne isiliye toh aaj yahan ho..."
Auntyji started the 2nd level of conversation ...N Aadi congratulated himself on passing the sudden-death round...
"Humari pinki bhi tumhare...Woh kya kehte hai... SAftware me hi hai...Mumbai me iski badi company hai...bahar ki hai...Hai na Pinky bitiya??" turning towards my gal
N there she gives me a a sweet n shy...free-me-le-lo-smile....to me...
I giggled like wicked sunny...
…..Auntyji toh main rishta Pakka samjhu...
Dream girl...dream home... On sum beautiful island...picture perfect!!!
and the dream girl sneezed ...every1 replied in sync hey raam!
A beautiful smiled passed nearby creating butterflies and elephants in my stomach..
"Kinke ho beta.."as if sensing the apshagun caused by cheenk..
"Auntyji Koli ji ka...."
There was a 1 min silence observed..
Auntyji gave a perfect fake smile...as if saying lets end it here...Aadi thought that he has lost his small mission sumwhere...
He remembered the famous dialogue from one of his fav movie Swades..Jo kabhi nahi jati wahi hai JAATI...
He understood ki humari kismat me toh beta aankhe thandi karna hi likha hai...but won't settle on anything
less than non stop nain matakka...thnxx 2 the perfect angle set by the coincidence of seating arrangement...
And sand glass of time was moving gradually...N they were settling down...
They heard Paas wale bhaiya telling some testimonies of Mumbai Trip...
"Ki Bhaiya...Mumbai ke cinema hall me bhi kaa gajab system hai bhai...picture se pehle jana gana mana chalta hai.."
Aadi thought what a deshbhakt...
"Mulle kafi thhe par phir bhi Sab khade hue..." he continued
Aadi saluted their thought process n started thinking about these biased minds ...Sheher ki safaai toh municipality kar degi par ye Mann ki safaai koun karega?
And he immersed himself into the quilt as they started playing cards bringing back the dreaming horses back to mind’s stable and sending the revolutionary thinker inside on bon voyage....
Heard a voice inside…Bade logo ke soch me chote maare jate hai...Hamesha…N there in the dreams he was eloping wid the gal in the other side of the world...
"Chaai chaai ....chaai le lo..." Chaai wala pushed Aadi slightly n asked...
"Bhaiya chai lenge...Allahabad aane wala hai..."
Aawaz sunke Angdaai maari…Dekha toh paaya ki kisi sundar chehre ki jagah koi amma apni paltan ke sath baithi thhi….He went to the gate side…had subah wali full fledged kulli...Apni shaqal ka jaayza liya…Aur khud ko dekh ke muskuraya…Is this loss of another wud-hav-been-my-dream-gal…??N full confidence me 1 aawaz di…
"Bhaiya 1 Cutting Chai dena…"
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